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大家好，我是来自加拿大的雅思老师Mac。今天，我们来看看10月23号的大陆雅思大作文真题。老规矩，以下是正文目录：

1. 题目分析

2. 高分范文

4. 范文朗读

5. 范文地道词汇中英对照，包括：

题目改写高分词汇&句型展示“词汇丰富度”的高分词汇&短语展示“连贯与衔接”的通用词汇&句型

上题：

Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is (but only about) the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

审题：

Type: Opinion 观点类大作文 (我的观点：support a dress code)Body 1: the argument of psychology Body 2: the effect of this psychology — and the quality of work

- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -

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- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -

- (1) Introduction -

Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question 题目改写：

Some people think that = It is felt by some thatnot care about the way = have no business in regulatingtheir employees = an employeedress = dress codebecause = sincewhat matters is = it ___ ___ that is importantthe quality of their work = their ability

Standard Phrase for the “Opinion” type essay 观点类大作文通用句型

I disagree with this viewpoint for the following reasons.

Words showing Cohesion (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：

that, sincethis

Vocabulary 高分地道词汇和短语：

regulating 管理；约束dress code 着装要求

- (2) Body 1 -

Aspects that must be referred to:

the way their (employers’) employees dress

Standard IELTS essay phrase 通用句型：

One of the main reasons for why…is important

Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：

formally stipulated 正式规定；明确要求socially expected 大众能接受的have a psychological impact on 对……有心理影响visually observe 看到psychological aspect of 心理方面propels 推动；驱使the industry of fashion 时装业a central aspect of our lives 生活中的核心部分speaks volumes to 充分说明了the psychology behind 背后的心理code of dress 着装规定what is considered socially acceptable 大众能接受的it is clear that 很明显

Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：

, eitherorbecause, without doubt,thebothandwhoThis, in fact,is whatbecome, and as such,speaks volumes toRegardless if, itthat

- (3) Body 2 -

Aspects that must be referred to:

the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work

Standard IELTS essay phrase 通用句型：

This

Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：

psychological factor 心理因素behind the power of 在……力量的背后co-workers 同事subordinates 下属managers 经理apparel (尤指正式场合穿的)服装staff members 职员to conjure 制造a personalized image 个人形象clothes (verb) 穿着have an impact on 对……有影响state of mind 心态；心境absolutely 绝对abundantly apparent 非常明显has some sort of effect on 对……有某种影响the mentality of ……的心态

Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：

Thisthat, such asand, and for manyLikewise, astheby whichHence, though it, it, and so itindeedoras to how

- (4) Conclusion -

Standard IELTS essay phrase 通用句型：

In conclusion,in my opinion,

Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：

the manner 方式；风格a person presents themselves 展现自己be taken into consideration 考虑by proxy 因此work performance 工作表现efficacy 效果

Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：

, though itmost, it is by no means the only, and thatby whichalso, as it can, and by proxy,actuallytheir

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